Black Squirrel (second draft)

I worked on Black Squirrel pretty extensively again this morning.

 

In the spirit of yesterday’s post, I thought I’d continue to document my work in progress. As evidenced below, I wasn’t kidding when writing that the first draft could change quite substantially. Now verses have an entirely different structure and some chorus lyrics have been tweaked slightly.

 

This will probably be the last edit I share publicly. Since there’s only part of the second verse to go, it’ll just be a matter of picking apart what’s there afterwards. In the interest of leaving a bit of intrigue until its official release, I don’t want to go beyond this version.

 

Anyway, enjoy!

 

Beyond these baron trees

Where there’s nothing left to grieve

Unsure of how our future evolves

I’ll be nursing my disease

 

I don’t wanna stay,, nothing changes anyway

I think that I’ll be better off now, I think the sun is coming around

 

High on a limb, snow on the ground

Taking its time, a black squirrel comes down

Enveloped in darkness to feed off the light

It’s not how you live, it’s in what you can use to survive

 

verse

 

I don’t wanna stay,, seasons changing anyway

I think that I’ll be moving on now, I think the sun is calling me out

 

High on a limb, snow on the ground

Taking its time, a black squirrel comes down

Enveloped in darkness to feed off the light

It’s not how you live, it’s in what you can use to survive

 

Right now your heartbeat isn’t coming through

But maybe someday I can trace it back to you

 

Though Nothing much makes sense

I’m climbing out again

Honestly, there’s not much else to do

 

High on a limb, snow on the ground

Taking its time, a black squirrel comes down

Enveloped in darkness to feed off the light

It’s not how you live, it’s in what you can use to survive

 

Once drifting in silence

We’ve made an escape

With distances growing

They mirror each day

 

Our lives move in cycles

It’s hard to explain

We’ll crawl through the winter

To finally resurface again

 

We’ll finally resurface again

Finally resurface again

 

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